or instead of flying we can put we're reppin for CA.. ive been thinkin about it..lol..

im not a fan of the last line. I would prefer it to rhyme or be something a little different. Just the "Cause cali leads the way" part. The rest is good tho!

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The only problem that I have with it is that the entire state will look like it is wearing a California Allstars shirt. Not sure if that is such a great idea

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Yes that was the same feel I had for it. First I would like to say THANK YOU for taking on such a huge project. I know you are trying to rhyme but maybe you don't have too and thay way you can spell out CALIFORNIA in huge bold letter's that people will be able to see from far away and know that WE ARE FROM CALIFORNIA

I love it as is!!

I'm sure when one sees the entire t-shirt, and not just the slogan(?) others will realize that it's not referring to just California All-stars but all of the California teams attending.

Just an idea but maybe something about the West Coast (I know totally played out but something like, 'Aint no party like a West Coast party cuz the West Coast dont stop' or West Coast rockin your WORLD...with a world and our state across it on the front)and then the whole word California (could be reppin' California with all the team logos on back) instead of "CA".

See why you got the shirts this year????

Thank you for all your efforts!

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We're fighting for the title

 

from San Diego (or just Diego) to the Bay

our styles got you speechless

'cause Cali (or California) leads the way

**with all the logos on back

West Coast
Rockin' Your WORLD
**with Cali's outline on top of a world on front?

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     I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!

i love it that way... it took me like all night to think of something... thanks for the feedback.. and build on something that everyone could agree to..

Anonymous wrote:

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Anonymous wrote:

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We're fighting for the title

 

from San Diego (or just Diego) to the Bay

our styles got you speechless

'cause Cali (or California) leads the way

**with all the logos on back

West Coast
Rockin' Your WORLD
**with Cali's outline on top of a world on front?

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     I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!

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I think that anything that has CA or CAli in it could be confused, but technically the abbreviation was the State of California's first, so we really can't do anything about it.  I think stating Cali will be understood and I like the diego to the bay better.  If you read it I also believes that it rhymes as well.  I will be taking more feedback until 1pm and then I need to get it to my art guy.  Thanks for the ideas. 

Nicole

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Front of shirt
We're fighting for the title

 

from Diego to the Bay

our styles leave you speechless

'cause CALIFORNIA leads the way

**in outline of Cali's shape as originally planned**

Back of shirt
West Coast is
Rockin' Your
WORLD '08
**with Cali's outline on top of a world
(or just a b/w world and that saying bolded across it)
and all Cali teams logos all around**


Thanks Mindee for such a cute rhyme for us to play with!  It is GREAT!
Airborne coach you are WONDERFUL!
I definitely will need 4!

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Thanks Mindee for such a cute rhyme for us to play with!  It is GREAT!
Airborne coach you are WONDERFUL!
I definitely will need 4!